Scene Breaks with Purpose:

Using Transitions to Control Pacing and Emotion

Scene breaks aren’t just formatting—they’re emotional punctuation. They signal shifts in time, tone, POV, or intensity. And when used intentionally, they can elevate your storytelling.

When to Use Scene Breaks:

• POV shift (especially in dual POV fiction)
• Time jump, or location change
• Emotional reset or dramatic beat
• To build suspense or give the reader breathing room

Formatting Tips:

• Use a consistent symbol (e.g., ***, #, a blank line, or ~)
• Consider labeling POV if clarity is at risk
• Don’t overuse breaks—each one should earn its place*

Bonus Strategy:

Use scene breaks to mirror emotional pacing. A sharp break after a revelation can feel like a gasp. A soft break after a tender moment can feel like a sigh.

Scene breaks aren’t just visual—they’re visceral. Use them to guide your reader’s heartbeat.